I'm an awful writer

new song (partial) lyrics, made out combining night 16 & 20:

a dusty tours destination
that has seen better days
is where you ran off rail
it lost its sheen in the first early spring
when the dreams of the 1980's failed
a few bad choices some dubious concerns
what you're offering
what you're offering
I don't know
what you're offering
you' re offering
I’m picking up I’m moving on
I’ve got to leave I’ve got to find my way
thank you very much
I’m an awful writer
my address changes too often
to try to keep in touch
I turn away and broken phrase you say
kick the traces, kid
kick up a little dust
kick the traces
kick up a little dust
what you' re offering
you' re offering